09/20/10
Today in expository reading and writing, we continued to edit a specific essay. This essay talk about responsibility and the dream of a student to become a automotive technician. Today we learned to stay on topic and to put 1 TOPIC PER PARAGRAPH. We also learned the usages of a COMMA.
09/21/10
Today in expository reading and writing, we continued essay editing. Today we started a new paragraph to edit. In this paragraph we focused on the topic of money issues. We also talked more about how there should be 1 topic per paragraph and if you change the topic, you have to change the paragraph.
09/22/10
Today in expository reading and writing, the class started a new essay to edit and make justice. While editing this specific essay we learned that the first sentence determines the direction of the entire paragraph. We also talked about the fact that a paragraph should only have 1 topic, not several different ones. We were also told to remember that a reader want to read an essay, not an big huge paragraph. THE BURDEN FOR CLEAR WRITING REST WITH THE WRITER!
09/24/10
Today in expository reading and writing we had SSR. I, Cesar, continued to read the book THE INDIAN AND THE CUPBOARD. In todays reading it got to the point in the book where the little boy, Omri, has shared his secret about the real- live indian to his friend patrick. Also in the read, its getting harder for Omri to keep it a secret from his family. And I, Josh, read Kingdom Hearts vol. II & III. I'm at the part when Sora, Donald, & Goofy went to the Olympis Colluseum, where Hercules train, for the tournament and when they won, they were about to go to another world, they got eaten, by Monstro the giant whale, but they escaped, with a little help from Gepetto and Pinnocchio.
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